“P.C. Language Changed My Life”


Gioncarlo Valentine wrote an article titled “P.C Language Changed My Life”, in which he explains how the expansion and inclusion in the language we speak is necessary for those who feel away from the world. The audience is people who are strangling to find peace in their body as a male or female. He also explained how the addition of new pronouns could really help everybody find a place of their own, and how he feels that he has missed that bus because he feels at home with his male body.
            This is an informative and personal essay that is intended not only for the transgender community, but for everybody who is trying to understand and identify who they truly are. The author is a person a kind and understanding person who has gone through great struggles to find a home in himself.
            The author used emotional appeals in order to persuade the audience by incorporating personal experiences. For example, when he mentioned how girls would call him “she” or “her” in order to hurt her when they wanted to make fun of him or viewed him as a threat, and when he tried to commit suicide because he couldn’t find peace within. This is something part of his audience can relate to if they’re going through the same experience.
            He tries to be neutral with his diction, but his emotions can be seen through the words. He made his point clear from the beginning which is great for the readers to understand. The tone is definitely serious and emotional, but it doesn’t make the readers feel uncomfortable. It persuaded me because it made me realize how important language is and how mindful we need to be of others’ feelings when communicating.

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